I am a Year 3 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Davan is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you.
Kia ora Maz, We are Room 5 at St Mary's school in Gisborne. I like the background, says James. I like the question mark, did you make it? Asks Havish. The black in the middle stands out, says Alayna. Maybe next time you could crop the other person out so it's easier to see, says Maycee. Mrs Torrie told us to not have lights in the backgrounds of our photo because it makes it harder to see, maybe you could do the same. Says Frankie. It's a little bit tricky sometimes. From Room 5.
Kia ora Maz,
ReplyDeleteWe are Room 5 at St Mary's school in Gisborne.
I like the background, says James.
I like the question mark, did you make it? Asks Havish.
The black in the middle stands out, says Alayna.
Maybe next time you could crop the other person out so it's easier to see, says Maycee.
Mrs Torrie told us to not have lights in the backgrounds of our photo because it makes it harder to see, maybe you could do the same. Says Frankie. It's a little bit tricky sometimes.
From Room 5.